You know, it seems like DeathTitan can see the future / read my mind, 'cause almost all of what he said reflects my current thoughts.
This is one of my favorite chapters. I like your writing style because unlike other authors, you don't focus entirely on the sexual intercourse portion of the stories you write. Well done, on a scale from S, A, B, C to D (with S as the highest), I'd give you an S for this chapter.