Review for Collateral Damage
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-01 01:58:16 AM
You've proven you've got a very attractive and addictive sense of humor in the course of the previous chapters but now you've also convinced me that you have some damn fine (serious) writing skills in you.
puts hand in her pocket, pulls out a rating point and slams it onto chapter
The flashback scene was neatly connected to what was going on in the present. I loved it. :)
Drop out of school* and update soon! ;)
* Please don't...
FRERARD. ONE-SHOT. "Because he knows it's Gerard, now."
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