Hey there!
I'll be honest with you. That's not the ending that I was expecting. IT was sort of toned down compared to the rest of your story. But that's not necessarily a bad thing. That means that you could (if you wanted to) lead it into a sequel. Which I hope that you do. Also it ended kinda of short. I feel like you could've gone a little further with it. But that's not saying that it wasn't great the way it is. I really enjoyed this story. It was really interesting and had twists that I would've never guessed would happen. This was a truly awsome story and I hope that you do write a sequel to it. Great job! :D I can't wait to read more from you!
~Tory