Review for Wild
Wild
(#) MarkPoa 2007-01-03 05:52:35 AM
On rereading, I think it was due to the first line being split up. "Sir?" and the second line were both spoken by the ship, right? The confusion I think was also enhanced by the line "That's hardly the issue," which I thought was said by the ship. But it was cleared up on rereading.
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