Review for Leapin' Wizards!

Leapin' Wizards!

(#) Niamh 2006-04-24 11:18:51 AM

LOL! This was a really cute little drabble. Good stuff. I too wouldn't mind seeing it continue. However, if you have no intention of stretching it out, I can't help but think the drabble itself would be more powerful if you just left out the "Oh Boy." Ending it with Al telling Sam who he is (IMO, at least) makes for a better punchline. 'Course, that's just my opinion!

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