Review for Revenge

Revenge

(#) MarkPoa 2007-02-02 05:44:58 PM

It's intriguing, though I thought the narrator sounded too rational to be narrating her own death this way. Just an impression.

Also, I think this could use a little editing as I managed to read some typos that jarred the mood you were going for.

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