Review for Delusional
Delusional
(#) DizzyDior12 2007-02-05 06:55:41 PM
That's some sick shit. It was kind of hard to take seriously. Maybe you should delve deeper into her brain and thought process if you're going to take the scary, insane route. It would be more chilling that way. You should definitley play on the emotions of the characters if you want to improve the story. I liked the end, though.
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