I liked this whole chapter for this line:
"What do you want me to say? I...really don't have time for this, Peter. I'll tell you what...tonight I have a date with MY husband and well I want to look stunning for him...and that takes time, so if you don't mind...we'll have to let this conversation for another occasion..." I got up stuttering a bit getting a hold of my stuff. "You are running away again..." he mused.
Awesome ambience, but I rated Original, because this is new and it excites me slightly.
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