Ok good plot but again lots of spelling mistakes and grammer problems. And why would a cave be in the country side? Wouldn't it be in the mountains or in the side of a hill. More discription would help the story alot. And this line contradicts itself. '"That's for me to know, and you to find out," Badger said. "Here. I'll give you the location and everything. Come and get him."' Why would he tell her to find it out when he was giving her the location anyways? Sorry for the crumby reviews but I try to be constructive and brutally honest