Review for Favourite Weasley

Favourite Weasley

(#) slasheh 2007-04-16 10:35:48 AM

well nice twist.
Now a few things: one for a meaningfull story it has to be longer, add some filler, maybe add a flashback to the first meeting.

second: don't switch the PoV. it doesn't really help the story.

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