Review for A Broken Heart

A Broken Heart

(#) Arisey 2006-06-11 09:31:26 AM

It was okay, but you should have made it atleast a bit longer. Also, you could've explained how Atlanta had been captured.

Author's response

Ok... I've added to the story, and I tried to sort of say how Atlanta was captured, but I also wanted the reader to decide what they think... Is that ok?
Thanks!

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