Review for you can keep my brother

you can keep my brother

(#) jerseygirlxx 2007-05-06 06:03:07 AM

She really does come off sweet and shy and innocent! But Im still like WTF? You left off in the middle of a car crash didnt you?! Ive got to go back a chapter...brb.

Author's response

yeah, i know but i didn't want the traditional 'oh they're saved, ya'. i wanted to do something different, and i thought it's a good idea to skip to the concert and you get that it was a close call but they got saved because they're at the concert almost getting sky killed again.

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