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• Steam Punk Potter

  (#) Blackwolf742003 2008-07-07

  Good job. I like the world that Hermoine finds herself in, and Harry actually beating Dumbles is a treat. Looking forward to seeing what Harry and Hermoine learn on their own, and how Hermoine makes her way back to her Harry.

• Steam Punk Potter

  (#) Rocky235 2008-07-29

  I was looking through the new stories page and saw yours. It left me cold. Here we are a week later and this time I decide to have a look see.
  
  I'm glad I did. The title I didn't like and couldn't make any sense out of turns out to be perfect.
  
  I always have liked Hermione. Though I like Ginny, Luna, well, all the girls I guess.
  
  One of my favorite stories is by HiBob, "Plantagenet". This has that flavor too.

• Steam Punk Potter

  (#) fool2folly 2008-08-19

  iThe vision of Hermoine in corsets and a victorian style ladys day suit keeps running through my mind.
  
  after thst chapter she better return to main timeline with lots of weapons plus interesting books and cloths.
  
  good start.

• Steam Punk Potter

  (#) AnnF 2008-08-26

  Please state explicitly if this is a crossover and with what series.
  
  Also, shirts and dresses are clothEs they are made out of cloth.
  
  Rags are cloths.

• Steam Punk Potter

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2009-02-10

  Good chapter.
  
  gunny

• Steam Punk Potter

  (#) Cateagle 2009-06-06

  Heh, glad to see this one again. I do rather likely Harry's "percussive chastisement" of Dumbles and I can't blame him. It looks like life's quite 'sporting", in very different ways, for Harry in both universes. I'm looking forward to more.
  
  In the meanwhile, nitpicks:
  "...friend of Harry Potters." should either be "...friend of Harry Potter." or "...friend of Harry Potter's." I prefer the first alternate.
  "...that their was..." should be "...that there was..."
  "Harold Jamison Evan Potter", shouldn't that be "Harold Jamison Evans Potter"?
  
  There may be more, but those are what caught my eye on first reading.

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