This is one of the first fics I intend to finish. Ranma/RK crossover. This fic is dedicated to my good friend Kelly for being such an enthusiastic anime fan.
- You indicated it was Ranma and Rurouni Kenshin crossover but didn't credit the Salior Moon. As for Rurouni Kenshin portion of the crossover, I don't see it yet. The first chapter seems good, but I think you might want to tell what Kasumi believes what happen on Genma training accident so she has preset notion of the accident. While this different having the opening chapter in Kasumi point of view, you need to write more for to get more that fair rating from me.
- Yes, please. I know it's been a while, but I would love to read more. I agree with jmm44 that seeing more of Kasumi's POV regarding Genma would be nice. I also agree with Dumbledork in that it's a nice story and I would dearly love to read more.
Thanks for shaing.