(#) alice93 2008-07-23 05:06:18 AM
That was so good. Poor Kelsey. Mark needs to get caught NOW!!
It's really creepy that he's trying to break her and Bob up and they have no idea. And that guy nearly killed Kelsey and he didn' seem to care.
Thank you so much!!
You see I need Mark for the sequel since the whole story revolves around him. So no Mark getting caught. That's not to say someone won't find out just can't do anythng about it.
Wait until next chapter, we'll learn a little more about Chris and is Mark really suspicious free???
As soon as I can and thans for the review!!