- Aw oh my lord. That was so tragic, I'm crying. Really, really well written. I loved how you described Frank, 'perfect', because that's what he is. Also, how you said his voice was childish and innocent was spot on, it really is. It just makes him all the more adorable. How could anyone possibly hate him? (unless your cold and heartless like Marilyn Manson!)
I loved it! You should do more one-shots. Their really great.
Author's responseThankies! < 3 muchas love.
Um, anyway...hahahaha, I adore Marilyn Manson. True, he's an asshole. And a freak. And he was a total bastard to Frankiekins. But he's still cool. He's just a staple, I guess. I'm mad at him for being so rude to Frank though.
I like writing oneshots, but ideas are hard to come up with, so...I dunno, we'll see.
(#) ThreeCheersForMCR_x 2008-08-18Wow that was brilliant and completly moving. My eyes actually welled up when I reached the end. It was quite beautiful if I may say.
How the hell do you manage to write so well? Seriously, you just have a way with words you know? Maybe it takes you a while to get the words out, i don't know. But the way you write is just so perfect and flowing.
Anyways, I'm going to shut up now but I just had to say what I thought of this awesome piece of writing :)
Author's responseAw, geez. You know, you always make me so embarrassed. You're too sweet. Thanks so much for reading my stories and liking them, you have no idea how happy it makes me.
I honestly don't think I'm as great as you say, seriously. But thank you!
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