- Fantastic as usual, man! And ignore the malcontents who gripe about the length of your chapters. The ONLY thing with your stories that is too long is the wait between chapters.
Again, excellent and unique story. I'd rate you up, but Ficwad for some reason doesn't want you to have a 6 rating....
- Good chapter. I was tempted to comment at fanfic but since anon is not allowed for your reviews there I was unable to (over the year I've had three attacks from the fanfic site two of which got pass my firewalls and were stopped by norton, for that reason I will never register on fanfic).
Anyhow I'm really curious to see how you tie this one up at the end.
- Ahh...an apprentice worthy of Chiun at long last...
Being paid three times for the same hit shall not only make the Master happy, but also feed the hungry mouths of Sinanju for many months.
As for the 36 steps to ecstasy, it is clear that his problem stems from his targets. A good Korean girl, from Sinanju, would surely hold up longer than the round-eyes...
Then again, Master Chiun once commented that he seldom had to go beyond step FOUR...
- Highly amusing, as always.
A lot of people might complain that Harry is too 'super', but that's probably mostly due to a lack of familiarity with the source material. In this story, Harry's level of supreme bad-assedness totally works.
And, hey, he did get tagged once in this chapter, so nobody's perfect.
Poor Pansy, used by Riddle. She's misguided, sure, but she has the good sense to be attracted to Harry, so she can't be all bad.
Remo - "...but here I am, bidding my time..."
Bidding is what you do at an auction, BIDING is what you do when you wait.
"That filthy Muggle dared kill one who bares my mark?"
Snape may have bared=showed his mark to people, but I have a feeling you meant BEARS=carries.
Of course, if you already know this and those were simply typos, bear in mind that roughly half of my explanations are actually made in hopes that others will read them and commit them to memory.
A forlorn hope, I know.
Keep up the good work. (Personally, I'm waiting for Hermione's hard shell to crack. Maybe Harry can try out all thirty-seven steps then.) :)
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