- Highly amusing, as always.
A lot of people might complain that Harry is too 'super', but that's probably mostly due to a lack of familiarity with the source material. In this story, Harry's level of supreme bad-assedness totally works.
And, hey, he did get tagged once in this chapter, so nobody's perfect.
Poor Pansy, used by Riddle. She's misguided, sure, but she has the good sense to be attracted to Harry, so she can't be all bad.
Remo - "...but here I am, bidding my time..."
Bidding is what you do at an auction, BIDING is what you do when you wait.
"That filthy Muggle dared kill one who bares my mark?"
Snape may have bared=showed his mark to people, but I have a feeling you meant BEARS=carries.
Of course, if you already know this and those were simply typos, bear in mind that roughly half of my explanations are actually made in hopes that others will read them and commit them to memory.
A forlorn hope, I know.
Keep up the good work. (Personally, I'm waiting for Hermione's hard shell to crack. Maybe Harry can try out all thirty-seven steps then.) :)
(#) Thanatos2040 2011-03-14This story is a hidden gem. Finding it was a point of glee in my day,and I couldn't help but grin and laugh at Harry's exploits. I sat up for hours, enthralled, and now I can't help but go find the Destroyer series to read. Your work is among the best I have encountered and I eagerly await more.
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