Third Chapter, First Battle, First Sin.
Wow, this is really original, and very well written!
I like it ^^
Keep up the good work.
Yes, more! I love this story. You must continue this story!!
Bunny, you rock!!
(lol, I'm so insane!!)
More as soon as possible, kay?
Next chapter should be up by tonight! Thanks again!
i love it!
it has a dante's inferno feel to it, with the whole challenges for the dead thing going on. very original. :)
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