Daphne's visit home continued. Harry visits with Hermione and George...
- So Hermione made Harry sound like an immature berk in the book, at least according to Harry. I wonder if she was as honest with her own character and made her a self-righteous know-it-all?
Author's responseI'm sure she did. Hermione always struck me as being very honest with her self.
(#) red_jacobson 2009-01-04 09:39:31 AMHey Pal;
Just been re-reading some of your stories, and have to wonder, is there any more of this story in the pipeline?
Author's response- Yeah, I'm working on the next chapter off and on as interest in that story appears... The next chapter is "Neville"
- Hmm, There seems to be a distinct lack of Tracy in this chapter... If Harry and Daphne are both in Britain, and there are no children at home, then why wouldn't she come with?
Another chapter would be fun, but I don't really know where you'd go with this. You've done the Harry and Tracy saving each other. You've done the meeting with Daphne, and you've now done the reunion with friends/family in Britain. .... Yeah, now what?
Author's response- Tracey has her career, she owns a gallery in Soho... With the upcoming shows she had, there was no way for her to get away.
- "So, you and George huh? I'd have bet on Angela."
"We flipped a coin." Alicia shrugged. "I lost."
yeah i know it was mentioned a couple of times already, bur that doesn't change the fact that i had to get the coke from my monitor.
anyway, good story keep up writing (and maybe some other authors will learn some grammar)
Author's response- Glad you liked it. I just wish I'd remembered her name was Angelina...
(#) noreenklose 2009-05-16 10:34:47 PMExcellent. Can't wait for next chapter!
You were absolutely right in your criticism of Ginny not being right for Harry. I also think that Hermione should have dumped Ron instead of marrying him!
I love Harem Harry stories.