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Daphne part 2

Daphne's visit home continued. Harry visits with Hermione and George...

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres:  - Characters:  - Warnings: [?] - Published: 2008/10/11 - Updated: 2008/10/11 - 3894 words

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• Harry Potter and the Chance Meeting

  (#) DrT 2008-10-11 05:18:47 PM

  A nice, solid, amusing chapter. I found everything well-done -- but where can Harry have two wives in the Muggle world???? I don't think they'd likw Arabia!

  Author's response

  - pretty much anywhere... To the casual observer there would simply be two women in residence. A far from unusual occurrence.
  
  - People might assume, but no one would know.

• Harry Potter and the Chance Meeting

  (#) 31415 2008-10-11 07:35:42 PM

  > "We flipped a coin." Alicia shrugged. "I lost."
  
  And I LOLed. Another entertaining chapter. Thanks.

• Harry Potter and the Chance Meeting

  (#) Terdwilicker 2008-10-11 09:12:15 PM

  Angelina, not Angela. You'll want to correct that.

• Harry Potter and the Chance Meeting

  (#) Cateagle 2008-10-11 09:32:51 PM

  /"So, you and George huh? I'd have bet on Angela."
  
  "We flipped a coin." Alicia shrugged. "I lost."/
  
  My compliments, that's a classic one-liner. 'Twas a thoroughly delightful chapter throughout. I loved the reaction at the Greenglass home when Daphne dropped her little bombshell, the fallout from that should be "colorful". The little bits you're dropping as to how the war with Tom ended are quite intriguing and I hope you continue to flesh that out. All in all, a very solid and entertaining chapter.
  

• Harry Potter and the Chance Meeting

  (#) ImazI 2008-10-12 01:21:02 AM

  very interesting and entertaining chapter. love the work will be waiting for the next installment.

• Harry Potter and the Chance Meeting

  (#) jkjim 2008-10-12 03:23:21 AM

  I like how you delivered a backhanded criticism of HBP, and one of the many reasons that the Harry/Ginny pairing in the story sucked.

• Harry Potter and the Chance Meeting

  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2008-10-12 05:20:00 PM

  Pretty decent update. The strengths of this story are the interactions of the three main characters, so it was a bit slow. Still good, given the circumstances, though.
  
  Also, right at the end, you wrote "Angela" when (I assume) you meant "Angelina".
  
  Looking forward to more.

• Harry Potter and the Chance Meeting

  (#) youngdosha31 2008-10-12 11:51:29 PM

  I can't wait to read what happens next. I picked this up while I waited for an update on The Marriage Contreact and I'm really glad I did. I love fics with Harry paired with either the Black women, Daphne, Tracy, female Blaise, or all out all of em in a harem.(Perfect)I like H/D storys but every time I read em and the author adds Tracy as Daphne's BF I always figure hell they should share em. Thank god for authors like you. I can't wait for your next update. Please keep up the great and long chapters.

• Harry Potter and the Chance Meeting

  (#) hordac85 2008-10-13 01:38:31 PM

  Excellent.Keep it up.

• Harry Potter and the Chance Meeting

  (#) ficbob 2008-10-14 07:31:13 PM

  Excellent
  Looking forward to more

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