- This chapter was pretty cool! I loved how you said Frank hated it when people don't take the time to spell correctly on texts and stuff. I'm the same way.
Just one thing I didn't get...how did Bert get all the way to Frankie's house in New Jersey? Utah is like, five hours away from Jersey on an airplane! Or was the party not in Utah? I'm confused...or maybe just dumb.
And Anti-Flag is the bomb.
So is Nirvana, but I hate Teen Spirit...lol =]
I hope you write more. I see that you didn't get any reviews...but now you have one. Ficwad really sucks nowadays!
Author's responseThank you very much for your review. :)
Okay, so i'm gonna admit it. It was a mistake. -embarrassed-
Well, i'm not american if that can count as an excuse at all? Also, i have no common sense, or much intelligence for that matter, whatsoever so i guess that's why I forgot to counteract the distance from Utah to NJ. I am incredibly sorry and apologise for this mistake. But I am trying to think up a reason for the whole Bert-getting-to-NJ-from-Utah thing. I have a few ideas at the moment but they are a little rough around the edges. Don't worry, i'm working on it.
So once again, thanks for reviewing. It really means a lot and makes a difference to my mood to write.
(#) IeroMyHero 2008-11-09i'msosorryi'msosorryi'msosorryi'msosorry
Okay...I am such a bad person. I didn't review this tremendous chapter. Kill me. And I also didn't work on our Frert or even on either of my stories. Oh my gosh, I'm so sorry!
Man, this was one awesome chapter. With the Frank and the Gerard and the Bert and the...OH MY GOD!!!!!!! Sorry, a little sugarhigh. or something else high.
Let me point out why I love you:
’God you’re no fun. Lemme give you a clue. Well, it’s a chick, and she has long blonde hair, big tits and puts out to any and every guy when she’s had a bit to drink. Ring any bells?’’
‘’Erm, three-quarters of the female population at Timpanogos?’
Hahahahaha. I love you. I feel the need to repeat repeat myself.
But oh, by the way, I have the same question LoveFAI did. How did Bert get to New Jersey? Or did Utah get teleported? Or did you just make a mistake? Cause as unlikely as it is, it might be possible. Wow, I sound like a dickwad. Haha, I'm a dickwad on ficwad.
Like I said...high...
Write more when you can and kick all the teenies off ficwad cause then I might start to write again.
Haha. You don't need to apologise! I never expect you to review. I mean, I absolutly love it when you, or anyone, reviews but I never expect any. That would make me a dickwad. Lol.
Thank yooooou!!! I don't mind if you're high (sugar or not). It makes your reviews extremely amusing. ;D
Erm, you probably know why i made that dumb mistake if you have read my response to LoveFAI. If not, then scroll up a little bit and read it cos i cannot be arsed to type it all out again. :P But, I will say that I am really sorry for stupidity.
Anyways, Grazie molto. You're a star. And i'm sorry but I don't think I will be able to kick the tweenies off here haha. They will probably infect me with their Gerard-Way-obsessiveness. Side effects: the ability to write awful fics about meeting, falling in love, and running away with Gerard. Not neccessarily in that order. Yeah, i'm in a bitchy mood haha. Ah well, who doesn't get them?
(#) LoveAndDeath 2008-11-19Just came across this story while I was searching for some good ones. It's pretty sick.
It's a great plot, write more. Cause I'll totally read it.
Author's responseThank you so much for your review. I will definetly be continuing with the story and I am currently working on the next chapter right now.
I am ecstatic that you will continue reading too. Once again, thanks!
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