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BESTFRIENDS FOR LIFE! RIGHT?

by axelflames 3 Reviews

Four chicks all bestfriends meet four guys all bestfriends. Do you know what will happen? You think you know you have no ideal!

Category: Panic! At The Disco - Rating: G - Genres: Drama - Characters:  - Warnings: [!!] - Published: 2008/10/15 - Updated: 2008/10/17 - 1013 words

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  • BESTFRIENDS FOR LIFE! RIGHT?

    (#) Lollipops_n_Gumdrops 2008-10-17 02:02:00 PM

    Hey. Don't feel bad that some people didn't like it. :D Just keep tryin'.

    Try spacing out your paragraphs and using comma's in your sentences so they're not drawn out. Sometimes the smallest things make the biggest changes.

    Good luck!

    Author's response

    Thanks it means a lot that someone read my story and cared enough to give advice. And no I WILL NOT GIVE UP! You can bet your lollipops and gumdrops that
  • BESTFRIENDS FOR LIFE! RIGHT?

    (#) axelflames 2008-10-18 03:01:46 PM

    Thanks it means a lot that someone read my story and cared enough to give advice. And no I WILL NOT GIVE UP! You can bet your lollipops and gumdrops that.
  • BESTFRIENDS FOR LIFE! RIGHT?

    (#) PanicAtTheDiscoluvr 2008-12-28 09:41:16 AM

    Very good! my stories pretty much suck soo when i read this im like why cant mine be this good? and i have to try harder and you will too! i kinda wished there waz more chptrs soo it waz a panic one but soo far soo good! keep it up! =)

    Author's response

    Thanks! This means a lot. I think I'm ready to start posting again. Please come by and read my new chapter to imagination is a girls best friend. I will be sure to stop by your stories and read your stuff. And again thanks a lot!!

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