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To The End

Meeting the dynamic duo. And Isabella's mind set

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst,Humor,Romance - Characters: Bob Bryar,Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way,Ray Toro - Published: 2008/12/05 - Updated: 2008/12/06 - 1743 words

Reviews

• No,I'm not okay,my life's a freaking clich'e

  (#) izziebella 2008-12-05 05:31:12 PM

  that was really good. And you used my name, so that makes this my fave story ever! Jk, but actually its a really good story, but if i can make a suggestion, you dont have to do this but if you could double-space it that'd be cool cuz' it'd make it easier to read...or maybe i just need glasses. Idk. Well update soon!
  Xo-izzzibee

• No,I'm not okay,my life's a freaking clich'e

  (#) Moonshyne 2008-12-06 04:36:39 AM

  I like this so far, especially why the bears, that was too cute. I love the friendship between them.
  
  Another suggestion on top of izzibee's quotation marks, makes it easier to know what is conversation and which is thought. You use it a few places, but not all.
  
  I can't wait to read more!!

  Author's response

  First thank you for reviewing. Secondly I did do double spaces. I think it loaded funny. So I'll double check that next time. Thanks! :)

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