Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > No,I'm not okay,my life's a freaking clich'e
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No,I'm not okay,my life's a freaking clich'e
(#) izziebella 2008-12-05
that was really good. And you used my name, so that makes this my fave story ever! Jk, but actually its a really good story, but if i can make a suggestion, you dont have to do this but if you could double-space it that'd be cool cuz' it'd make it easier to read...or maybe i just need glasses. Idk. Well update soon!
Xo-izzzibeeNo,I'm not okay,my life's a freaking clich'e
(#) Moonshyne 2008-12-06
I like this so far, especially why the bears, that was too cute. I love the friendship between them.
Another suggestion on top of izzibee's quotation marks, makes it easier to know what is conversation and which is thought. You use it a few places, but not all.
I can't wait to read more!!Author's response
First thank you for reviewing. Secondly I did do double spaces. I think it loaded funny. So I'll double check that next time. Thanks! :)
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