- "A true Slytherin abides by two rules, Lee. First, never tell everything you know," Pansy answered.
I loved thus line!
Author's responseThe challenge with lines like that is just making them make sense in context. Glad you enjoyed it; that's a good sign that I succeeded in doing what I set out to do.
(#) DemonHunterPrime 2008-12-26Luna gave away the ending a little but it was still quite enjoyable. Look forward to the sequel.
Author's responseThank you. Actually, given where I posted the story, a lot of people guessed the ending...
I'm now working on the sequel, which I hope you'll also enjoy.
- If Luna gave away the sequel, I missed it.
Was this the last chapter of this story? If so, a sequel is desperately needed, just to cover the reaction in the Great Hall. Of course, all the boys with their vacant looks wondering what is going on.
Author's responseI don't think I said Luna gave the sequel away- although she did have a hunch.
The Great Hall reaction will be Scene 1, Part 1 of "Team of Rivals."
(#) Wonderbee31 2008-12-27Yay! A fun fic where we get to see Harry and the ldies have a warm lovig relationship, and the oter girls are likely to be eaten up with jealousy( the guys as well once they figure out Harry is dating all four girls, and more want to share him.) Can't wait to see the sequel.
Author's responseThank you. As for the sequel, I hope it lives up to expectations. It will put Harry and his girlfriends in perspective, I hope.
- I didn't expect from the summary the story to be as entertaining and well written as it was. It's definately a good piece for simple uniqueness of it all .
Author's responseSorry about the summary, then. I don't always do a good job with summaries.
I'm glad that you've enjoyed the story.
I loved this one.
I have to confess that I guessed fairly early what the result would be...
You had me surprised with the "live action", though... (and I didn't think that the "losers" would make deals to have more hopes to win...)
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