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Day Two - Sit Still
6 ReviewsTwo days into sobriety. *For Canustakemyheart's SOC challenge*
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Day Two - Sit Still
(#) canustakemyheart 2008-12-27 01:02:28 PM
O___o This gave me bad flashbacks. It was awesome ... so realistic actually.
Great job on the challenge =D -
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(#) iwillstakeyourheart 2008-12-27 03:22:06 PM
If you could give canustakemyheart flashbacks, this was damn good!
It even made me feel tense. You're a superb writer.
=)Author's response
Thank you! That means a lot to me, really. But I can't help but get the feeling that I touched on a difficult topic there.
I hope I didn't upset at all, I didn't mean to.
I've no idea where it even came from. All I do know is that I felt every moment of it while I was writing it. It was odd, I don't mind admitting.
Thanks again :)
Sas x -
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(#) canustakemyheart 2008-12-27 07:10:38 PM
Hey - no it's totally cool =D Yeah, I've been through getting over being an alcoholic and all that and those experiences will always be with me, but it's in the past too, ya know? Life is good now xD
I still really love reading shit that can get me to really feel stuff though. And you're excellent at that! -
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(#) Leah270193 2009-01-18 12:02:28 PM
Hey, this was awesome and very realistic. I think the writing technique of repitition and writing short snappy sentences added to a real sense of anxiety and aggitation. I know what it feels like to be a recovering addict. I was never an alcohol but I misused over the counter painkiller (codein mainly). So this brought back some pretty edgy momenets for me.
Excellent job. You reveiwed my story so i'll review yours XXXX Keep writing you're brilliant!!!Author's response
Thank you! It really means a lot to me, especially as you've been through it.
Sas x -
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(#) Leah270193 2009-01-18 12:02:39 PM
Hey, this was awesome and very realistic. I think the writing technique of repitition and writing short snappy sentences added to a real sense of anxiety and aggitation. I know what it feels like to be a recovering addict. I was never an alcohol but I misused over the counter painkiller (codein mainly). So this brought back some pretty edgy momenets for me.
Excellent job. You reveiwed my story so i'll review yours XXXX Keep writing you're brilliant!!! -
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(#) Leah270193 2009-01-18 12:07:59 PM
That was really awesome. It is extremely realistic and the technique you used of making the sentences shirt and snappy and using lots of repetition made the story feel edgy and tense. Keep on writing 'cos you're excellent and thank you for reviewing my story!!!