canustakemyheart's POV challenge POV – Mikey Way (2006 - Paramour Mansion)
- This was really good Neve, so emotional and i loved the random thoughts and Mikey's questioning of himself.
Author's responseThanks Moonpig, it felt so good to just write without having to think about where it fits in a story or if my sentences were right.
I'm glad you liked it. Cheers for taking the time to review :)
(#) canustakemyheart 2008-12-30 09:44:37 AMYeah, this was excellent. I love how deep it was - very insightful (it's getting a rate!) ... and how he would compare himself to Gerard.
And as far as doing it "right" ... I think that's the beauty of SOC ... I don't really think there is a right or a wrong. Just think about all the stuff that goes on in your own head. Sometimes it's really fragmented and weird, sometimes it's really deep and philosophical ... it's all over the board.
Author's responseThanks for coming up with the idea for the challenge. I know i chose a bit of a dark topic but it was the first thing that came into my slightly mental head and i felt i could write so freely. It was so nice just to let myself ramble and i thought it would be some big old mess but hurrah people were able to read it.
You rated me - wow thanks very much. I admit i based it on personal experience too (the feelings part anyway) and you know it felt really good to get it out. I've always felt really embarrased about it but knowing nobody here has a clue who i am gave me the freedom to do it.
Thanks so much for taking the time to leave a review.
(#) canustakemyheart 2008-12-30 08:44:30 PMI've always felt really embarrassed about it but knowing nobody here has a clue who i am gave me the freedom to do it.
Can I just say, EXACTLY, huh? LOL I still feel a little weird writing certain "stories", but then there's other ones that cross so far into that shadowy netherworld of "too much information" that I wouldn't be able to look anyone I knew in the face if they'd read it and knew it was me. Once again, thank god for the anonymity of the internet!
Author's responselol i agree, if i wrote exactly what i wanted in the story and someone read it and recognised me i don't think i could cope with it. I keep alot bottled up but this has been a brilliant way to get it all out. Cheers for that.
I also just wanted to say thanks for reviewing, it really gives me alot of confidence in my writing. I'm still so nervous about posting because the people that review my stories are such amazing writers and it's a bit daunting.