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Give Up Tonight
4 ReviewsMy attempt at poetry...
"Give Up Tonight"
Can't you tell
that pain is there?
I'm not doing very well,
and I know that you don't care.
I know I'm not worth much.
Let's just pretend that you can see
all this mess inside my head;
It's slowly killing me.
I've never been good at life,
even though I've always tried.
I'm sick of never giving up.
I should've just tried suicide.
I'm sorry I'm in your way,
but I won't break down and cry.
Today wasn't a very good day to live,
but tonight should be a beautiful night to die.
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Meh... I'm not too good at poetry, but it's a try, right? Just let me know if I should stick to writing stories...
xox
Can't you tell
that pain is there?
I'm not doing very well,
and I know that you don't care.
I know I'm not worth much.
Let's just pretend that you can see
all this mess inside my head;
It's slowly killing me.
I've never been good at life,
even though I've always tried.
I'm sick of never giving up.
I should've just tried suicide.
I'm sorry I'm in your way,
but I won't break down and cry.
Today wasn't a very good day to live,
but tonight should be a beautiful night to die.
---
Meh... I'm not too good at poetry, but it's a try, right? Just let me know if I should stick to writing stories...
xox
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