- You overuse the word "freak" a bit. It doesn't quite come off as a comment on Dudley's limited vocabulary.
Maybe this would be cooler if you gave us a look at what's going on in Mr. Dudley's piggy little brain. Is he still afraid of magic? Is Harry still a skinny loser to his mind?
(#) Mollyscribbles 2006-04-07A nice take on Dudley; while I like a story that gives the Dursleys a chance, I find that a lot of the 'redemption' stories are overdone. This had a good balance, having Dudley not fully understand the situation but fight back how he could.
Author\'s Response: Glad you liked it. I figure Dud just likes pumeling people. :)
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