(#) TornAndFrayedPages 2009-04-05Sweet!!! New chapter!!!!
I like how you ended it with the "Did I?" It makes me worry. That is some good foreshadowing right there. ('cause as much as we want them to be happy, we know SOMETHING will happen soon because otherwise it would just be boring)
You were right and Frankie was a little un-Frankieysh in this chapter, but with his dad being gone, it wasn't unbelievably un-Frankieysh so that's okay.
Update soon, please? Your story's so sweet...
(#) warwornlipstick 2009-04-05Hmmm, this is interesting. I'm glad that they are finally telling each other their feelings and all that shit, but I can't help but think something bad is going to happen. I don't know what, but something that's not particularly good? Hahaha :D
Well, this chapter was good. I liked it.
(#) doyleangel 2009-04-06AWWWWWWWW....Frankie and Gee are a couple....thats so awesome..
But, are they going to be able to keep it from the school?
And they'd still have to pretty much keep quiet about it until Frankie turns 18...and thats in like...6 months...if graduation is in 2 months and in June, i'm assuming it's april...
OOO so much still to work out...update soon!
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