by blacknailsgd
2 Reviews
Category: Good Charlotte -
Rating: PG-13 - Genres: - Characters: -
Published: 2009/03/29 - Updated: 2009/04/08 - 1488 words
Reviews
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keep writing!! i really liked it!
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I'm sorry but this just... is unreadable.
It would be great if you spaced things out, used capitalization and re-checked your work before posting... There are just too many errors.
Great try though. I see this was posted awhile ago.
Hopefully you've already improved from this point. And hopefully this doesn't come off as insulting. If so, I apologize.