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• Chicago, the fang-like thorn in my side

  (#) ohhai 2009-06-07

  omg are you really English? that's so awesome bro lol
  
  my first thought when you wrote about the family being newbies was "MORE LIKE SHOOBIES" (rocket power kids HOLLA)
  
  I hate forgetting dreams. Seriously it's my biggest pet peeve. dhasgsdf ugh.
  
  Good start, I like the whole disappearance concept, but that's my sick mind for ya haha
  
  Update sooooon! Gatta see where this all leads! :D

  Author's response

  Ugh. Thanks again. Yup i'm English. This review made me feel better...lol at the shoobies.

• Chicago, the fang-like thorn in my side

  (#) MyChemicalFangirl 2009-06-07

  I love this story so far! :)
  Update soon yeah? :D
  And I'm curious about who the tall darker haired guy was tbf. ^.^
  Loves ya,
  Christie, xo

  Author's response

  Thank yoouu =]

• Chicago, the fang-like thorn in my side

  (#) Chicago-Kid 2009-06-07

  Kinda. . . ironic how the clubs name is W.B right?
  Haha, not intending to sound mean, don't worry :)
  
  xx

  Author's response

  I know i know! I was sitting in front of the screen for bout 20 mins before i gave in thus came w.b you all new he was in it any ways.

• Chicago, the fang-like thorn in my side

  (#) let_it_go 2009-06-07

  so, i pretty much love the idea of something different.
  
  with the disappearances and all, its bringing a new kind of change to the epic vampire tales. weee.
  
  and i like how its a disappearance at a pretty populated place. like club W.B... and btw: it took me forever to figure out what it meant. xD i'm that clueless. haha.
  
  and you being english = super sweet. (i'm too easily amused...)
  
  

  Author's response

  Ah yes you are one of the vanishing acts. Glad you think it's ok.

• Chicago, the fang-like thorn in my side

  (#) ixamxnotxaxnugget 2009-06-07

  DUDE. ENGLISH PEOPLE RULE. Thus meaning, you rule. :)
  
  Ahhh amazing start. Not gonna lie.
  AND HOLY JESUS BROOKE: I havn't heard anybody name drop rocket power in foreverr.
  
  I'm also with Harper, took me a while to get the whole 'W.B' club name. (I'm probably worse considering I didnt even notice til I read Crystal's review..)
  
  I like this.
  Sounds like its gonna be good. :)
  
  And dad's can be jerks. But its all good. :P
  
  Update soon.
  -Natalie (the other)

  Author's response

  Your reviews rule! Which means you rule lol. Thanks.

• Chicago, the fang-like thorn in my side

  (#) xPrettyInPunkx 2009-06-07

  I see me X) Haha nice so far, you dad kicking you off the computer sounds like something my dad would do too. I can't wait to read more! Oh and btw I think you have me perfect in there haha I can totally picture me saying and doing that stuff. =)

  Author's response

  -sighs in relief- thank goodness your ok about how i portrayed you! That was somthing i was crapping myself about lol. Thanks.
  
  -sighs in relief- thank goodness your ok about how i portrayed you! That was somthing i was crapping myself about lol. Thanks.

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