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CH 5 - Strange it really is

Note: This Chapter is un edited and not beta'd as I don't have one. I needed to post this because I'm about three chapter's ahead and need feedback on any possible mistakes and plot holes I can't s...

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2009/07/07 - Updated: 2009/07/07 - 6991 words

Reviews

• Like A Dark Lord Only Crunchy

  (#) dalchemist89 2009-07-07 01:12:07 PM

  this story has a really good plot and it has a great amount of potential good work :)

• Like A Dark Lord Only Crunchy

  (#) torgrim83 2009-07-07 08:42:49 PM

  Wow, that was hot with his sister. I hope things work out for them.
  Great chapter.
  Torg.

• Like A Dark Lord Only Crunchy

  (#) pyrgus 2009-07-08 09:51:27 AM

  You should put up the rest of the chapters right now. betaed or not.

• Like A Dark Lord Only Crunchy

  (#) mohd7590 2009-07-08 09:56:51 AM

  Please update, great plot, good romance. i hope Harry is powerful and gets a harem :)

• Like A Dark Lord Only Crunchy

  (#) qiaoyech 2009-07-08 05:15:43 PM

  Well... I think other than occasional spelling and grammar errors your story is fine. It's a bit too early to tell though. I can't judge a story unless it contains at least 40,000 words.
  
  I hope there would be more sophisticated plots as the story goes on.

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