(#) marcialj83 2009-07-07 01:22:38 PMOKAY FIRST OFF NO WORRIES IN NOT POSTING.
SECOND, HAPPY BIRTHDAY. I HOPE THAT IT WAS FUN AND THAT YOU GOT ALL THAT YOU WANTED.
THIRD THIS STORY FUCKING ROCKS AND I MEAN ROCKS. I LOVED THE ENDING:
‘That’s what I said’ she huffed ‘it’s your turn to get the prize’
‘You’re right Mini’ he said with a smile catching Cheyenne’s eyes as he walked though the kitchen to the garden. ‘It is my turn.
IT IS FRANKS AND CHEY'S TURN TO BE TOGETHER. I JUST KNOW IT.
LAST, RANDOM, BUT I LOVE CAP LOCKS.
Author's responseHello lovely. Thank you for the bday wishes I had an awesome day.
I love the ending too, that was writen in litterally second before I posted I thought the ending needed a little more uumph! So I'm glad you liked it.
I'M HAPPY YOU WRITE IN CAPIITALS MAKES YOUR REVIEW LOOK LIKE YOUR SUPER EXCITED!! lol x
(#) URAFever22 2009-07-07 04:05:49 PMI hate it when people say this but i'll say it anyway... Happy belated! Hope you had a good one!
Anyway... GAH! Frank caught Chey and Gerard fucking! Awkward... haha. I seriously can't stand Gerard. He's just ruining this story for me. I ADORE Frank. Frank and Chey FO'EVA! If he would just tell chey how he felt, i'm sure she'd take him in. PUHLEASE update soon!
- Hi there,
Happy Belated B-Day!!! I hope you had a great day.
I'm going to go against the grain here. By the end of Forbidden I didn't care for Frank too much. He cheated on Jamia with the bitch and then he was willing to do it again with Chey before Marcus said anything. Frank should have told Gerard everything up front and then dealt with the ramifications they were best friends after all, but instead he convinced Gerard it was okay to cheat. If he had been honest in the beginning this all might not have happened.
I hated Gerard at the end of Forbidden and at the beginning of this until you eluded that he might not have been the mysterious figure (which I still think is Frank becasue he wanted to save his marriage). In the flashbacks Gerard is still an ass, but at the beginning of this chapter I started to get a soft spot for him. Not only that she was willing to cheat on him before the truth came out so. I found that she was very hypocritical. What's good for the goose is good for the gander.
Frank says he loves her but at the end of this chapter sees her as a prize, where Gerard is thankful to have another chance with her.
I usually hate Gerard triangle stories he always seems to get the girl. I'm for a change rooting for him (I love an underdog) in this one at the moment he seems to really appreciate what he has now. We'll see
BTW Good for Bob staying away from Amber, thing about secrets they always come out. She should have told him what was going on.
Now that I had my little rant just wanted to say so looking forward to more.
(#) doyleangel 2009-07-11 08:48:11 PMOMG What? Frank wants Chey now? But what about Jamia? I mean, he still loves her right? Or maybe he doesn't? Wow, he's in love with Chey, thats such a twist...i kinda knew it but didn't see it coming you know? I can't wait for the next update