Frank finds himself in the intense care unit.
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-08-03 12:01:57 PMOh..my..jizz-cakes.. I'm a douche bag, whoo! Ha ha anyway :)
You're an amazing writer! And to be honest, I WOULD google the lyrics but..my laptop is too slow and..well..I dunno. You're already writing this story and it's got a person in it that I made up, so that's good enough for me :)
I really can't wait till the next chapter. This fic is good! I mean, sure it made me wanna scream at the womancough Linda, and the nurses, but I mean that's when you KNOW what you're reading is like Class A material, y'know?
Author's responseHahaha, yeah, I know I said all the characters would be people in the hospital, but it works out better this way, right?
Anyway, thank you SO much for reading it and haha at least you're honest about the googling!
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-08-03 01:13:47 PMAck! Sorry bout that..I used my old account lol
that one above is meeeee!
Author's responseOhhh okay. So I was thinking Ash would be just a guy Frank knew in the past. Like, he'll be in the story more than this, when Frank has other flashbacks.
I just think it'll work out better because if everyone is at the hospital, it sort of makes it hard to give them all important parts. This way, Ash is an important part of the story, but he's also like different from the rest of the characters.
I dunno, do you want him to be in the hospital, because I can write that if you really want. Your choice.
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-08-03 01:40:04 PMwell.. i dunno.. yeah, i think he should like eventually end up in the hospital. you can't be that mean and not have problems, y'know? but its also your choice cos you're the writer :)
Author's responseI'll see how it goes, and I'll decide as the plot progresses,
(#) IeroMyHeroMCR 2009-08-03 02:18:56 PMThis was awesome!!!!! Amy how many accounts do you have haha. You really are an amazing writer (even though you denied it) YOU ARE so take it bitch lol! I'm mad at Linda like she didn't even try and comfort him well she should have grrrrrr! Update soon please, this is one of my favorite stories now it's so original!!!!!!!!!
Author's responseHahaha well, thank you so much :P I actually was extremely proud of this chapter, so maybe I am pretty decent at writing.
Lol, you'll find out a lot more soon.
(#) MyChemicalSuicide 2009-08-04 08:28:55 PMThat was amazing! That Ash kid sounds like a total fucker. :P Poor 6-year-old Frankiee. ):
This was really really good, though. I could totally feel his emotions and clearly see everything, and thats just amazing writing. Update soon.