Just some errors I saw. Side not site. Canine is a dog, feline is a cat. tongue not tong. Last is to, too, two i.e. too much not to much. Anyway this is a very good start, quite an enjoyable read.
Not great but not bad. Original idea and I shall wait to see how it will start.
my guess is Jules because if this was real I would date her, very nicely done and damn was that a good story, I can't wait for the next chapter:):)
(#) DJ32 2006-12-18
I don't know when You updated last but I hope you do soon. I think this is grate.
this is cool story. keep it up. what is the other's animagus forms? you didn't say.
keep up the good work, orignial like the story
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