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Chapter II

Just read ;)

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance - Characters: Harry - Warnings: [!!] [V] - Published: 2006/04/09 - Updated: 2006/04/09 - 9813 words

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• Harry Potter and the American Elite Commandos

  (#) Fuzzball 2006-04-09 07:46:51 PM

  Just some errors I saw. Side not site. Canine is a dog, feline is a cat. tongue not tong. Last is to, too, two i.e. too much not to much. Anyway this is a very good start, quite an enjoyable read.

• Harry Potter and the American Elite Commandos

  (#) Black_s_Phoenix 2006-04-11 07:09:41 PM

  Not great but not bad. Original idea and I shall wait to see how it will start.

• Harry Potter and the American Elite Commandos

  (#) Shaggy37 2006-04-28 10:10:15 PM

  my guess is Jules because if this was real I would date her, very nicely done and damn was that a good story, I can't wait for the next chapter:):)

• Harry Potter and the American Elite Commandos

  (#) DJ32 2006-12-18 08:29:02 PM

  I don't know when You updated last but I hope you do soon. I think this is grate.

• Harry Potter and the American Elite Commandos

  (#) jedielfsorcerer 2007-08-27 02:30:22 PM

  this is cool story. keep it up. what is the other's animagus forms? you didn't say.

• Harry Potter and the American Elite Commandos

  (#) Vampyre5201 2007-12-18 08:08:57 PM

  keep up the good work, orignial like the story

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