in which Harry has a small reunion with his adopted brother, demonstrates ‘The Ribbon’ to the Magical world, and laments lost opportunities. Lucius Malfoy and Severus Snape make some very larg...
- after reading Remo's note, I'm kind of hoping something happens that gets Little Father involved. maybe Harry getting frustrated about being held back, and inquiring help on drawing Lord Funny French Name out. funny thing, I just get this odd feeling that Harry could get through all 37 steps with Hermione (likely only through her sheer stubbornness).
(#) The_Pharaoh 2011-02-02 08:38:42 PM"Squishies" LOL!
I think you overdo Hagrid's accent and I can't see McGonagall sporting a thick Scottish brogue, but aside from people's speech patterns and the occasional use of "the" in front of someone's name (is this translated from another language?), this story is great so far. And don't worry about chapters being too long.