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Harry Potter and the Psychopath’s Phone

by MyraSwift 1 Reviews

Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone parody. Harry thinks he's a cat, and that's only the start of the characters' problems!

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: G - Genres: Humor,Parody - Characters: Harry,Hermione,Ron,The Giant Squid - Published: 2009/09/15 - Updated: 2009/09/15 - 1261 words

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  • Harry Potter and the Psychopath’s Phone

    (#) cloneserpents 2009-09-15 10:32:57 AM

    In my opinion, you went overboard with the wild and crazy antics and dove headfirst into annoying. Zany does not necessarily equal funny.

    Every line does not have to feature someone saying or doing something silly or crazy. Try toning it down a bit.

    Shawn (a.k.a. cloneserpents)

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