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The Custody Hearing Part 2

by Moonshyne 2 Reviews

The custody hearing continues

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: R - Genres: Angst,Drama - Characters: Bob Bryar,Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Ray Toro - Warnings: [!!] - Published: 2009/09/22 - Updated: 2009/09/23 - 2799 words

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  • Getting My Baby Back

    (#) shehadtheworld12 2009-09-22 11:37:32 PM

    No!! How could that jerk do that! Poor Bob, I could just imagine his pain, and poor Alyssa. Oh gosh I was smiling at first, then I just gasped as I read the rest. I can't believe it!

    I sort of giggled at the end as Gee was becoming angry with the 'woman', but sadly Alyssa thought he was talking to her...hopefully she sees him and they sort things out? And poor Bob is released from jail!!! That is just extremely unfair and I wish they could see it that asshole Lawrence who's abusing her. Poor Emily...oh gosh.

    So looking forward to more.

    xoxo

    Author's response

    Hi there,

    The jerk could do that very easily as you can tell there isn't a hint of remorse in what he did all he knows is his ass is saved and they are keeping Emily but we'll see.

    Yeah Bob couldn't believe what he was hearing being torn to pieces for being accused and the fact that was happening to his daughter. Poor Alyssa is just in too much shock over the whole thing. She just wants to get Emily out of there.

    That was the point, to get everyone to feel good about what was happening in the courtroom so glad it worked.

    LOL!! Poor Gee having that "stalker" and then the misunderstanding with Alyssa. We'll see if they get the chance to sort things out.

    Don't worry Bob gets released but it will take a few hours.

    It is unfair but when has Lawrence been fair just see how he's used everyone around him. The judge is a pretty smart woman we'll just have to see if she can make sense of it all and get to the bottom of it.

    Poor Emily is right and the chapter after next we'll find out more.

    Thanks so much I really appreciate the review.
  • Getting My Baby Back

    (#) Sassy 2009-09-23 12:18:17 AM

    The three testimonies don't add up, surely someone can see that?? That Lawrence guy is so evil, I can't wait to see him get what's coming to him!
    Poor Alyssa! I hope that last line didn't mean she was going looking for drugs :( That would be the end of everything!

    This was really gripping and I feel so tense now!! Brilliant! :D

    Looking forward to more!
    Sas x

    Author's response

    Hi there Sas,

    You're right they won't add up and I'm sure the judge will see that, but will it be in time. Lawrence is certainly a slick one. I believe the chapter after the next things will start to come to a head only three or four more chapters. Yikes I can see the end!!

    Yes, poor Alyssa you'll find out at the end of the next chapter what happens with Alyssa. Belive it or not it's written just gotta beta it and it's going up. We'll find out exactly what happened the day Patrick was killed as told by an eye witness (which I did reveal in an earlier chapter).

    Yes everything is starting to come to a head lots of things are going to come to a head in the next two or three chapters as things start to resolve themselves.

    I hope you like it and as always thanks for the review!!

    LOL I just reread my response and it's very repetitive. I shouldn't be doing this at 6:30am.

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