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Fairy Tale Ending

He told me that there's no such thing as fairy tale ending...i now don't believe him...i want a fairy tale ending...please r/r!

Category: Poetry - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst, Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2006/04/13 - Updated: 2006/04/13 - 72 words - Complete

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• Fairy Tale Ending

  (#) MarkPoa 2006-04-30 06:08:11 AM

  I like the concept and message of this poem. It's just a feeling but, based on the message, I think this can be made longer, stronger... more emotional, I guess. It's okay as it stands now, but you may want to go back to this and extend it. The poem can only get better. :)

  Author's response

  and yet i keep thinking about this! i will revisit the idea...

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