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Forgotten Place

This is kind of a downer. Which is really weird since I was all happy and excited when I wrote it ^_^

Category: Poetry - Rating: PG - Genres: Drama,Horror - Characters:  - Published: 2009/11/16 - Updated: 2009/11/17 - 133 words - Complete

Reviews

• Forgotten Place

  (#) oxdikeyatbestxo 2009-11-17 08:36:57 AM

  haha, I feel incredibly dumb for not realizing each line started with the next letter of the alphabet. Anyway, I really like this! It all seems to really work together well, and is really descriptive. The last line is a bit lame, ha, but I don't blame you- not very many words start with Z.

  Author's response

  That's okay. A bunch of people I showed it to didn't notice either XD
  Thanks for reviewing! And yeah, I even looked at an online dictionary and couldn't find anything I could use for Z lol

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