*Songfic* Harry helps Hermione cope with Ron's death after she finds an engagment ring on his dresser, obviously meant for her. Post-Hogwarts, set after final battle.
(#) Shania 2006-04-14 08:28:19 PMThat was so sad! I really loved it, but it made me cry. Great job, please write more. ~Shany~
Author's response~Wow, thanks! That is so nice of you! I really appreciate the review, i'm glad you liked it! I'm sorry it made you cry! Please continue to read my work, and thanks again for the review!~
- Firstly I should declare an interest - I don't like Songfics, especially when the song take up more room than the narrative. That aside, this is a fairly well-written emotive piece.
What could have been done to make it better would have been to try to make it less generic. Beyond the description of the characters involved, we needed something uniquely /Hermione/, perhaps her trying to find solace in a book of philosophy or trying to find some kind of magic in a book that could delete her emotional attachment to Ron without her memories of him. As it is, you could change the names and put it in any fandom that you like.
A valiant effort but, in truth, not really standing out from he crowd.
BenRG's Rating: 5/10
Author's responseWow, thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you didn't absolutely despise it! I know it isn't the best, and I don't quiet like songfics that well, either, but I thought I'd give it a try, and I'm proud of myself for that. Thank you for your writing tips, hope you continue to read my work! Thank you so much for the review, Loooove Chels