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The Darkness Is The Safest Place To Hide

I felt safe enough to hurt. I felt safe enough to hide. (Bob's P.O.V.)

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama - Characters: Bob Bryar,Gerard Way - Published: 2009/12/06 - Updated: 2009/12/06 - 455 words - Complete

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• The Darkness Is The Safest Place To Hide

  (#) revenge 2009-12-06 01:09:01 PM

  Very good, really! Job well done. But it's a tad short. I think if you elongated the plot line, it'd be even better. But very original and creative. Kudos! :)

  Author's response

  I apologize for the story being so short. Being able to write more in a single story is something I definately want to acheive in the future. And thank you so much for the advice as to elongate the plot line. It will be very helpful for the next time I write.

• The Darkness Is The Safest Place To Hide

  (#) VendettaEmma 2009-12-06 03:34:26 PM

  I agree with 'revenge'. It's still awesome, though!

  Author's response

  Haha =] Awesome? Why thank you ;)

• The Darkness Is The Safest Place To Hide

  (#) MyFamousLastWords 2009-12-06 03:34:53 PM

  Original indeed. I'm reviewing this from my phone so if it's all like bad, sorry!
  
  was the lines in italics lyrics from a song? I think this could be used as a metaphor too. (Well if it wasn't already) I like the way it just ran so smoothly.
  
  F oxox.

  Author's response

  The italics were not from lyrics, but that's an interesting thought. Same with the metaphor idea. I wish I would've come up with those...
  
  Anyways, the italics were basically supposed to be a bit of foreshadowing. The italics were influenced by the regular text, and therefore a result of what was occurring.
  
  Does that make any sense whatsoever? Or am I just rambling nonsense again? Because lately that's all I've been doing ;)

• The Darkness Is The Safest Place To Hide

  (#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-12-06 05:11:09 PM

  I luffed it :) Very creepy and Bob-like, in a way. Although, I am curious on who it was in that chair. Man or woman, virgin or non-virgin, famous or no.. ETC..
  
  So anyway..
  Yeah. Luffed it to DEATH, hun xD

  Author's response

  Man, non-virgin, famous.
  
  Does that help you in anyway ;)

• The Darkness Is The Safest Place To Hide

  (#) Clinga 2009-12-06 08:28:30 PM

  Aww :( Sad & slightly creepy chapter.
  
  I'm intrigued, please write more! :)

  Author's response

  Creepy stuff is fun =]
  And this was only meant to be a one shot. So alas, no more. Sorry! Thanks for the review though :D

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