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Chapter 2

Harry and his wives return to Hogwarts

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres:  - Characters:  - Warnings: [V] [X] [?] - Published: 2009/12/28 - Updated: 2009/12/28 - 12385 words - Complete

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• The Truth

  (#) rijlkent 2009-12-28 07:13:03 PM

  Clell,
  
  I can't remember if I reviewed the first chap... shame on me if I haven't.
  
  It's great to see you embark on another long story, and I like your take on the harem and bond angles. I'm a little surprised it's taken Hermione so long to come around, and that Harry and his wives haven't spent more time (that we've seen) trying to figure out Dumbles purpose. Partly, I'm annoyed that you haven't used that to give US some clues.
  
  Anyhow, the intra-marital dynamics continue to amuse, Snape and Malfoy getting slaped down is always good. No plans to get smuttier? Ah, maybe orgasms of that level are best left to the imagination.
  
  Thanks for sharing.
  
  Take care-
  -Rijl

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  (#) Cateagle 2009-12-28 09:15:38 PM

  The dynamics within their group are interesting and amusing; 'twill be intersting to see what develops there. I will be quite interested in seeing how Harry deals with Hermione and her odd attitudes toward him, his not being a Dark Lord vs. his evilness in having a harem; methinks things are over on that topic at all adn she's going to be forced to rethink a lot of things - and likely make a number of apologies.
  
  I can't say that I didn't enjoy Malfoy and Snape getting dealt with as they deserve, though it's a pity a shard of glass or two didn't either emasculate Draco ro fatally wound him. Still, we can hope for better luck next time.

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  (#) dave_gerecke 2009-12-28 11:38:26 PM

  I have always enjoyed your writing, but this is turning out to be one of my favourites.
  
  I really like how the girls are interacting with Harry. I just hope he grows some brains.
  dave

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  (#) nimistar 2009-12-29 11:20:05 AM

  heh, finally a story that details all of the downsides of a harem. funny as hell.

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  (#) juggler196 2009-12-29 11:49:38 AM

  Definitely like it. A unique angle on the harem, which is refreshing. Bashing on malfoy&snape is always entertaining, and i've always been a fan of the manipulative dumbledore idea, especially when his plans to control harry backfire on him, which looks like what is going to happen with this. Having dealt with groups of women before, i can tell you that i can easily imagine the effects being modified by their individual magics as well as that of the bond. Wouldn't mind it if you bumped up the rating to nc-17, but thats just me:-) I really like this story so PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE update. The sooner the better, but at least don't abandon it.:-)

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  (#) Greatness 2009-12-31 01:49:39 PM

  Hehe, I love the story. Keep up the good work. Update as soon as you can please

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  (#) DrT 2010-01-04 05:07:58 PM

  Harry should be more reasonable -- the world hates more than evwery other year.
  
  I like how you're developing the wives, and I always enjoy a decent Snape bashing!

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  (#) dragonbreath 2010-01-18 04:15:11 PM

  Bookmarked and sorted. A classic in both humor and realism (well, as close as a harry-fic can get to it). I agree with juggler196... I mean, they are teenagers after all :).
  
  Awaiting the next installment with the tenacious trepidation.

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