(#) TheGiinger 2010-01-24I really like this!
One tiny constructive critisem (sp?) though- can you make it really clear whos talking and what they're doing please? It just gets a little confusing, but other than that, it was awesome :)
Please update soon!
Love Rae xo
Author's responsexD I'll try.
Things are a little hectic right now and I've already gotten the next two or three chapters done,
[because its a roleplay im doing, i just copy and paste it and turn it into one pov.]
but when i work on others ill try.(:
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