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Pancakes

by death_b4_disco 3 Reviews

'my back was against the head rest and her body was sat facing me in-between my legs, the front of her body touching mine. Her face was nuzzling into the side of my neck; my hand was on the back of...

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama,Humor,Romance - Characters: Gerard Way - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2010/02/06 - Updated: 2010/02/06 - 686 words

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  • The Art Of Love

    (#) EvieSaunders 2010-02-06 09:29:29 AM

    so good!
    such a cute couple... when will they kiss? xD
    great as always :D
    x

    Author's response

    Thank you for the review!
    and in response to when they'll kiss: Be patient Grasshopper, good things come to those who wait! In perspective, they're only known each other for two or three days max. And she just got raped so you know, it might take a while. But soon!
    Thanks again,
    Lu
  • The Art Of Love

    (#) VendettaEmma 2010-02-06 01:40:05 PM

    Niiiice. Haha, the 80s influenced this chapter? I don't see it. xD Why can't you just update all the chaoters you've written!? Stop making me wait! :(

    Author's response

    To be honest, I just think the 80s music put me in a better mood for writing!
    Also, the story is only really meant to be about Rhi and Gee so the others may not be in it much :/ they are in the next chapter though, or some of them are at least.
    Thanks for the review!
    Lu
    ps, I'll update the other characters more often from now on :)
  • The Art Of Love

    (#) wolf2008lllll 2010-02-06 01:44:04 PM

    I was just thinking, 'Can't wait to see there relationship get hotter.'
    They really are a great couple.
    Great to see your still updating. And I would have commented sooner, but I fell asleep watching Emmerdale.LOL.

    Keep up the great work. I'll say it again: You never dissapont!

    ^_^

    Author's response

    Don't worry it's gonna get hotter soon. I'm just trying to be realistic about the time scale. I know it's a story but it's me being a perfectionist :/.
    I'm gonna keep updating! It might slow down a bit after I go back to school on Monday but I'm gonna try and get one chapter out a day at least.
    And yes, emmerdale can be so boring you fall alsep as my nan proves, even though she loves it.
    Thanks for the wonderful review as always! :)
    Lu

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