'I felt my fist slam down onto the table. I hadn't realised how angry I had become.'
(#) Disenchantedxo 2010-02-06 06:06:34 PMhaha bob is awesome :) i'm glad you update this alot, another one soon? x
Author's responseAnother one soon. When I can be bothered to get outta bed. (it's 09:15 am here) I'll get started on it. Should be out by the end or the day!
And yes, Bob is awesome, he's so quiet during interviews and he's very shy, but the expressions he makes are brilliant. Gotta love Bob
(#) wolf2008lllll 2010-02-07 03:02:53 AMHa, your adding comedy! It's great. I love the all the deatail in your story. I've read fanfictions, with more detail, and length, ect... But the way you write is so minimal and short, yet its really effective.
I know what I mean... :)
To put it simply, its one of the best fics I've read in a while. As I've said before; I like to get my point across!
I really can't wait to see how it progress'.
Author's responseThank you for the review!
I suppose I am adding a little bit of comedy, I think most of it will come from Bob and Frank, just because they seem the funniest out of MCR, not that the rest aren't.
And thank you for the comment about the detail, I try adding detail in but it seems to start droning on when I do so I keep it short.
Its weird to think that people like my story so much, to me it's not that good, maybe because I've written it myself , I have no idea.
I'm writing a new chapter now! While doing my h/wk, so it may take a longer time than before.