- i like the story bt ur plot moves a little too slow, pick t up but good job!
Author's responseI don't wont to rush it. Frank is a liar he just can't get better in a day or so. I understand you want to see things move faster, but this is the way I want things to go. And I'm glad you like my story. But I already have the whole story written and everything. The plot will move a little faster but I'm not rushing it.