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Be My Hero

One-shot. It's a good one!

Category: Romance - Rating: PG - Genres: Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2010/05/10 - Updated: 2010/07/16 - 6457 words - Complete

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• Be My Hero

  (#) SmashAuthority2 2010-05-11 11:42:30 AM

  This was AMAZING. I simply loved it. I know how you usually write funny stuff but this was touching.
  It really pi**ed me off that guy Paul was bullying her so badly. Was he doing it because he liked her, or was he just a sick mother? Either way I told my bro about the dude picking on a girl and my bro (who's a bit of a psycho) started ranting about how he was going to rip his head off! I had to remind him it was just a story!!
  And I liked Jared's character, he was sort of mysterious. A bit like superhero's are!
  Anyway, before I fill up the whole damn page and bore you to death. Once again, good job. This was an enjoyable story. Well done. xx

  Author's response

  Haha, thank you! I guess in a way Paul liked her. I mean, what kind of girl would like a dick like that, y'know? (I personally like guys with a little bit of meanness in 'em, but ah!)
  
  Your brother sounds cool :) I'm glad I got such a reaction out of you, chickie!
  
  xD
  My teacher is making me wait till Thursday so that I can read it to her Lol She says she wants to "Hear my voice when she pictues it" because it's been so long since I've read to the class ^^
  
  I lurve you!
  Blue Moon
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• Be My Hero

  (#) jlyEchelonMCRmy 2010-05-19 07:22:45 AM

  This was so amazing I didn't want it to stop! There should be more stories this great and well written on here!!
  
  Well done!
  Jen xx

  Author's response

  Why thank you, Jen :) I don't know what else to say lol
  
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• Be My Hero

  (#) tamtaliya 2010-05-25 03:01:38 PM

  it's REALLY a good one! congratulations! i really loved it. touched me deeply... gives the food for thoughts...
  why can't fics be published, i wonder! some of them are definitely worth it! ^.)
  thank u)

  Author's response

  Haha yeah, I often wonder the same thing (:
  
  You are very welcome, my dear!

• Be My Hero

  (#) themission 2010-06-14 09:13:57 AM

  this was amazing! i loved it :) we need more great mars fics :D
  
  xo

  Author's response

  Haha thank you! :)
  If you have any ideas.. or anything.. I'll be glad to try and write them!

• Be My Hero

  (#) RebeccaRevenge 2010-07-18 08:45:04 PM

  Dude that was flippin awesome! I loved it. I actually read it like 5 times but was too lazy to review it :P

  Author's response

  Nice:) But I'm glad you reviewed it now and told me this! Haha did you read it while it was in the 3STM section?
  
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• Be My Hero

  (#) MCRmygirl 2010-11-27 11:21:01 PM

  This is amazing. Really. I loved it. Sadly, I still saw Gerard instead of Jared. I'm sorry. I'm just anal, I guess. :)

  Author's response

  Nah, totally not anal :P

• Be My Hero

  (#) Vampirechick1159 2011-07-17 12:49:54 PM

  So beautiful. :')

• Be My Hero

  (#) japulapu 2011-07-18 09:21:07 AM

  Great stuff. This is a great example of how you can write a good story without getting too intimate. Beautifully written and a swell ending. You connected the paragraphs well and there was a great flow of thought and emotion. Good transitions between scenes. I'm really impressed. Good on ya!

  Author's response

  Thank you so much! This is one of the nicest compliments I've ever gotten. I'm real glad you enjoyed it:)

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