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Chapter Two

by suzinixx 1 Reviews

Chapter Two: On the road again. or- I hafta go baffroom!!! Ariel contemplates just how the three of them wound up pulling an all-nighter driving to Miami...

Category: Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Humor,Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2010/05/15 - Updated: 2010/05/16 - 2635 words

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  • Far From Over

    (#) ilex 2010-05-16 06:14:11 AM

    Good back story, good action, but somewhere in the middle you got your italic markers mixed up or forgot the /} thingy . . take a look and redo the markers ( I hate having to do the [] thing to post my stories, but that's what this site wants . . . PITA! )
    ONWARD!
    HE!HE!HE!

    Author's response

    I saw that last nite when I went in and checked them all, but was too darned tired to fix it then. Will go back and do that today. thanks.

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